Storyboarding 3 - Giant Crow Crisis

This storyboard it's split between 4 group members and me (who did part 3 of the script), the focus of this storyboard is to focus on implementing character dialogue patterns, camera angle, and look/see technique. Additionally, also create an animatic to showcase the flow of the story.

Script:
FADE IN: EXT.INDUSTRIAL AREA - NIGHT Crows CAW in the distance. Red, a ten-year-old girl wearing a red hoodie walks past a factory. A loud explosion THUNDERS. Red falls. A lab guy in white coat dashes out of the factory, notices Red, drags her. Both lean against a wooden fence. A piece of fence is supported by a plank. RED (unsteadily) What’s going on, sir? A piercing cry ECHOES. The plank vibrates. RED (CONT’D) What was that? Sounds like a … LAB GUY (interrupts swiftly) The radiation might have harmed the bird. Red notices blood on his face. RED Your eyes, sir! Can you see? LAB GUY Barely. Kid, can you escort me to Town B, need to pass to Dr. Mah. He taps his leather sling bag. RED (steadily) No worries, sir! This district is my home. Red stands abruptly with a wide smile. Ground trembles. They peep through a gap in the fence. An oversized crow emerges from the dark passage. Its massive body rubs against the wooden fence. The wood CRACKS and tears the night sky apart. Then it stops. Its head cranes slowly above them. They see its red fiery eyes survey the surroundings. A cold breeze HOWLS. A hanging frying pan sways on the nearby cloth line. The shine on the pan catches its eye. OVER BLACK TITLE: SURVIVAL RULE #01: Keep all shiny objects. Lab Guy notices the crow eyeing at the pan. The crow CAWS then advances slowly, pushing through the wooden fence. LAB GUY (urgently) It's coming this way. Run! Lap Guy leaps out of the cover pulling Red along. A near miss.